The essay written by Elliot Adame about Canassatego's speech and its influence on Indigenous cultures was the subject of my review, and I focused on improving both clarity and depth. The purpose of my feedback was to improve the clarity of the thesis statement in the introduction by providing a more explicit phrase that would successfully guide readers through the argument. I underlined the significance of utilizing specific instances from the rhetorical text to buttress their claims, and I suggested making modifications to the transitions between paragraphs to improve the overall coherence of the argument. I intended to assist Elliot in refining their arguments and ensuring that the essay flows logically from the introduction to the conclusion by providing specific and helpful suggestions on these parts. Taking this technique not only helps to promote the formation of an argument that is more persuasive, but it also stimulates a deeper engagement with the subject matter, which eventually results in the reader's comprehension being enhanced.